My Collection of Poems

hello_babe · 发表于 5-10-2004 20:10:16|来自：新加坡

ok ok just to tease you~[em05]

死珊珊 · 发表于 15-10-2004 00:52:03|来自：新加坡

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用木易馬枫在2004-9-30 16:59:05的发言：

How should i start?
I broke up with my ex-bf because of my abroad study!
so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![em19][em19][em19]</DIV>
为舍么老是分居两弟就是分手的下场,这样的爱情也太脆弱了吧!不要也罢

死珊珊 · 发表于 15-10-2004 00:55:20|来自：新加坡

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用davier在2004-9-30 17:31:40的发言：

2nd poem by her
This one is written by her and not copied.
I love my darling Davier, he is deep within my heart.
I knew I wanted to be with him forever, right from the start.
I love him very much and hope and hope that we'll bnever break apart.
If we ever break apart;
My heart will cry forever, I could never imagine my life without him. 
I need him now and forever, I have faith our love will prosper,
and that we will endeavour not for just our time together,
but for eternity and forever......</DIV>

誓言都是那么简单就讲出来..............

死珊珊 · 发表于 15-10-2004 00:57:33|来自：新加坡

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用davier在2004-9-30 17:46:09的发言：

This is written by me 10 years ago when I was 13 or 14.
The falling rain never seem to cease,
and on my face the cold wind leaves a gentle kiss.
Standing there I made up my mind,
this Valentines' I will make her mine.
I made my search and found her there,
towards her was what I dare.
Was it I or was it not,
all I wanted was just a nod.
With twelve roses and one true heart,
that I've already done my part.
And upon this ocming Valentines',
wishing you might give some time.
To tell how you've changed my life,
and all this while I've never mind.
But dreams and reality, they've never met,
love was someting we could never have.
And now my eyes, they're so despair,
tthe love in them was no longer there.
Now I know that its up to fate,
how I wish it was never too late......</DIV>
天哪,这么小就写出这么深情的东西,我13岁才要发育呢

潘多拉外传 · 发表于 15-10-2004 12:03:17|来自：新加坡

English pls~

Nichollas · 发表于 18-10-2004 02:17:56|来自：新加坡

hey 死珊珊I fully agree with you. If someone who is only 13 or 14 years old can write such a long and impressive poem then i guess he must be a genius. Sorry for being too candid...

hello_babe · 发表于 18-10-2004 12:00:40|来自：新加坡

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用Nichollas在2004-10-18 2:17:56的发言：

hey 死珊珊
I fully agree with you. If someone who is only 13 or 14 years old can write such a long and impressive poem then i guess he must be a genius. 
Sorry for being too candid...</DIV>

It is possible if his English is strong. Anyway he is not from China.

hello_babe · 发表于 18-10-2004 17:20:39|来自：新加坡

你越怕被笑，越说不好！！！！

死珊珊 · 发表于 18-10-2004 16:20:36|来自：新加坡

我怕大家看了笑话,所有就不拿我的英文出来标榜了!

死珊珊 · 发表于 18-10-2004 16:17:01|来自：新加坡

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用hello_babe在2004-10-18 12:00:40的发言：

It is possible if his English is strong. Anyway he is not from China.</DIV>
新加坡人..........唉.........他不是说他女朋友很聪明么,我看他女朋友16,17岁写的情书没也他13,14岁写的好!.............赫赫,果真是"天才"!

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